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my fear of a nukeRate this Poem
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Created:
06/11 2008
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Category:
Fear
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the bomb
when the bomb explodes]the earth erodes] people are killed]graves are filled] the tears will flow] at the smoke will show] and war will soon follow] love will be dead]as they start the med]and the blood will spill red.] i fear the end.]and the will be hard to bend] amen.
| On July 28th 2008 Dannibabe94 Said: |
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| You are a really good poet! |
| On June 19th 2008 Inuyashapunk Said: |
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| Very good. I especially like the line "and the blood will spill red.". *evil smile* |
| On June 15th 2008 Relica123 Said: |
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| Np.Thanx 4 commenting me 2. :)))) |
| On June 13th 2008 dsouthdude Said: |
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| lol, thank you. |
| On June 13th 2008 Relica123 Said: |
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| OMG!!!.....I LUV IT!!! :D |


