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 I crawl up in a corner

 Surrendering my feelings to you

 I can't bear it any longer

 I hate what you do

 I try to tell you that I love you

 But the words are stuck in my throat

 But you deny me my love for you

 For you, you feel there is no hope

 I sit here in my corner

 Looking all lonely and sad

 When really I have faith and one day

 Things won't be as bad

 You tell me to stop dreaming

 That you've dreamt my dream before

 When really, all you choose to do is ignore

 You say there is no heaven

 That hell is greater than god

 But sometimes, everytime

 We are our own god

 So have no hope

 Feel weak if you want to

 But I have faith

 And I'll survive without you

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On June 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Woww, I feel the same feelings it sometimes hurt but don't let the great pain attack ur heart. Always listen 2 ur heart...and great poem!
On May 29th 2008 PROBETRO Said :
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ur poems talk of different things common in ever1s life and let me tell u they r good and prove ur a person of variety . i really hope that u rite more lines then william wordsworth coz as nature is diverse feelings r too.
On April 26th 2008 allisonpaige92 Said :
allisonpaige92 this poem is amazing
On April 26th 2008 allisonpaige92 Said :
allisonpaige92 this poem is amazing
On April 26th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC Hahahah yet again! an amazing poem. I LOVE IT. =) xoxo René
On April 24th 2008 drummajorpod Said :
drummajorpod I love it. I can't really explain why, as some of the best things in life must be felt with one's heart, not explained with words. But... wow. Great job. =]
On April 24th 2008 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 you have natural talent, keep trying and you can be one of the greatest