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You are my best friend |
I try
I crawl up in a corner
Surrendering my feelings to you
I can't bear it any longer
I hate what you do
I try to tell you that I love you
But the words are stuck in my throat
But you deny me my love for you
For you, you feel there is no hope
I sit here in my corner
Looking all lonely and sad
When really I have faith and one day
Things won't be as bad
You tell me to stop dreaming
That you've dreamt my dream before
When really, all you choose to do is ignore
You say there is no heaven
That hell is greater than god
But sometimes, everytime
We are our own god
So have no hope
Feel weak if you want to
But I have faith
And I'll survive without you
| On June 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Woww, I feel the same feelings it sometimes hurt but don't let the great pain attack ur heart. Always listen 2 ur heart...and great poem! |
| On May 29th 2008 PROBETRO Said : | |
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ur poems talk of different things common in ever1s life and let me tell u they r good and prove ur a person of variety . i really hope that u rite more lines then william wordsworth coz as nature is diverse feelings r too.
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| On April 26th 2008 allisonpaige92 Said : | |
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this poem is amazing |
| On April 26th 2008 allisonpaige92 Said : | |
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this poem is amazing |
| On April 26th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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Hahahah yet again! an amazing poem. I LOVE IT. =)
xoxo René |
| On April 24th 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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I love it. I can't really explain why, as some of the best things in life must be felt with one's heart, not explained with words. But... wow. Great job. =] |
| On April 24th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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you have natural talent, keep trying and you can be one of the greatest |


