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A Poet's Nostalgia
Petals of red float on the stream
Where once had bled a poet’s dream.
Now punished by cold fear
He wept profusely year by year.
And day by day the crying grew;
Became the mornings new fresh dew,
And dreams that by another fell
Became the mornings redened hell.
Leaves of gold float on the stream
Which once had known a lover’s dream.
Now pining one not there
She suffered profusely year by year.
And day by day the stillness grew
Became the mornings new fresh dew.
And dreams that once held breath
Became unknown since she kissed death
Where once had bled a poet’s dream.
Now punished by cold fear
He wept profusely year by year.
And day by day the crying grew;
Became the mornings new fresh dew,
And dreams that by another fell
Became the mornings redened hell.
Leaves of gold float on the stream
Which once had known a lover’s dream.
Now pining one not there
She suffered profusely year by year.
And day by day the stillness grew
Became the mornings new fresh dew.
And dreams that once held breath
Became unknown since she kissed death
| On June 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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I love the use of imagery |
| On June 14th 2007 Johanne93 Said : | |
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this is really good, deep, wonderful, i don't know a word best to describe it... |
| On May 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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that's amazing |
| On April 12th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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This is very innovating and interesting!
Loved it! |
| On April 8th 2007 Chris181 Said : | |
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Magical!!!AWESOME |
| On April 5th 2007 DevinLovesSam Said : | |
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I like it,,,...,,. |
| On April 4th 2007 dreamlesleep Said : | |
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thanks for the input |
| On April 4th 2007 silentstrike Said : | |
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That would sound better if it was came not became on all of them except the last line |


