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Holding a Grudge...Rate this Poem
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If lifes like a dick... |
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Definition of A true friend |
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No one can judge me.. |
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Opposites... |
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its over.. |
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I’m someone elses doll |
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Finally the bastard has gone |
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different reactions |
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Gods Gift |
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Demented Pressure |
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Because i am Pretty |
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I Think My Mate Fancies Me.. |
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All I Wanted For Xmas... |
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DO AS I SAY |
A Warning...
Ok so there was this guy
he was really shy
used to touch my hand
whenever he walked by
He was always discreet
made my heart miss a beat
and had the power to
make my face generate heat
There was that one time
we were surrounded with grime
because we were in the school gym
his body entagled in mine
Deciding which lessons to miss
we shared our first kiss
and rolled beneath the bleachers
giggling in bliss
He jumped up in a flash
red like a rash
i reached for his arm but
in my hand he threw cash
he was a bastard, scummy
i stood there like a mummy
the condom still sat in my bag
weird feeling in my tummy
i hoped the lord will save me
prayed that he forgave me
but as predictable as it was
9months later i had a baby
Right now you should be eight
with another family, a better fate
i just really wanted you to know
that you were a mistake
because you ruined it for me
i had to say goodbye to friends, my society
that is why i took the pillow and tried
to smother you when you were 3
However things have changed since then
they say I'm on the mend
i will be out in a couple of weeks
to get my final revenge...
| On May 14th 2008 Jbelled24 Said : | |
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From a mothers perspective? How did you figure I would like this? |
| On April 30th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow. i liked this too... and a surprise that i did not see comming. wow. i liked it. that's all i can say lol. good read. |
| On April 30th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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I like this. |
| On April 27th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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its alright, i mean pretty good but i do want to be honest, and its not the best but it is still good. just work on it a little more =) make it flow a little better |


