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Created on 1-15-08
sit
stand
pause
move hand
jump
blink
dont think
once done
stand
run
get out while you still have the chance...
Please Login to post comments| On February 7th 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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This is very unique. Could probably be edited to be much longer and more complex, but its simple now and light, yet meaningful. Nice job. |
| On January 22nd 2008 akrovaz Said : | |
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That is interesting... it's so simple yet it still rhymes. It's so short but it has flow. That's really something different. |
| On January 20th 2008 stitchchick92 Said : | |
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This is cool... |
| On January 15th 2008 Iamoffensive Said : | |
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I don't know why, but I like this. It has nothing really but I just like it. |
