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its over..
thrown into the darkness
kicked onto the floor
pushed, bitten and pinched
until breathing is a chore
pulled up by my hair
feeling fingers in my eyes
repeating that im sorry
but they still ignore my cries
slapped across my face
like im a naughty dog
finally left on the floor
but i cant see through the fog
pulling out an instrument
as shiny as a knife
like a theif its come to steal
my dear, precious life...
| On January 22nd 2008 akrovaz Said : | |
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Wow, definitely a piece of work filled to the brim with emotions and vivid thoughts. Nice work! |
| On December 4th 2007 bunkerbum218 Said : | |
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great job |
| On December 4th 2007 SheilaAsakura Said : | |
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I agree with thugnasty, very emotional. Good job! |
| On December 4th 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aw i love the ending. nice job |
| On December 4th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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very emotional...I love how u worded it. |


