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its over..

Views (124) Pain Created on 12-4-07 Flag

thrown into the darkness

kicked onto the floor

pushed, bitten and pinched

until breathing is a chore

 

pulled up by my hair

feeling fingers in my eyes

repeating that im sorry

but they still ignore my cries 

 

slapped across my face

like im a naughty dog

finally left on the floor

but i cant see through the fog

 

pulling out an instrument

as shiny as a knife

like a theif its come to steal

my dear, precious life... 

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On January 22nd 2008 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz Wow, definitely a piece of work filled to the brim with emotions and vivid thoughts. Nice work!
On December 4th 2007 bunkerbum218 Said :
bunkerbum218 great job
On December 4th 2007 SheilaAsakura Said :
SheilaAsakura I agree with thugnasty, very emotional. Good job!
On December 4th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aw i love the ending. nice job
On December 4th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 very emotional...I love how u worded it.