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a reflection of a lost friendship |
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My angel in disguise |
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Her Feelings |
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Daddy can't you see I know? |
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Keep walking |
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my hole |
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A Deep Thought |
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In my grandpa's eyes |
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Daddy can't you see I know?
I laugh and squeel through the air.
"one more time daddy! let me feel the wind in my hair"
His arms had the power to send me flying.
But then someone told me he soon would start lying.
Daddy, why would you lie to me?
I might be little, but i can still see.
He shakes his head with a convincing smile
I realize now, his faults start to pile.
Daddy, Daddy, why don't you keep still?
I know one day I'll be kept against my will.
You stare at me now, confused because you know,
Than one day I will try to let go.
When baby is born and teaching begins,
I won't take watching your heart breaking sins.
Daddy, don't you understand?
You'll hold us down so we cannot stand.
I know you love me, and them too.
But you'll ruin everything because of what you do.
| On June 6th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I agree~the point of view makes this good. I love it! |
| On June 6th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said : | |
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Awww.That s so cute.And I also like it how you put it from your point of view.Please check out mine. |


