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Her Feelings
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Created on 4-13-07
It all started to pile up.
Irritation rose within her like the flames of a forest fire.
Her face sank within its self; her lower lip curled in, her eyebrows narrowed, her eyes; distant.
Throbbing with agony she forced the tears down her throat.
Her flesh turned a nauseating gray, with sweat pelts forming at her forhead and traveling down her cold face.
she inhaled trembling, shaking uncontrollably.
The world she knew had consumed her, leaving her in this deranged place.
Please Login to post comments| On June 6th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this. It is very illustrated, leaving a clear picture in the mind. Nice job~ |
