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this was for my bf for our 1 year.Rate this Poem
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a reflection of a lost friendship |
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Are You Satisfied? |
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My angel in disguise |
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Her Feelings |
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Daddy can't you see I know? |
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Keep walking |
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my hole |
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Melody of Dwelling |
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Its a gift too many waste |
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A Deep Thought |
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In my grandpa's eyes |
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Wet Eyelashes |
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My angel in disguise
Dear Alex,
Well it’s been one year;
A year from my first kiss
A year of your warming bliss.
And the way you make me feel almost scares me inside.
My first instinct was to hide,
But you made it okay to open up.
Before God sent you to me, my life was a near filled cup.
I had my family and my friends,
But I lacked something more, and I searched all ends.
One day I became ill at ease
I couldn’t find that missing part,
I wanted more to fill my heart.
So I asked God to help me find
That missing piece, to settle my mind.
Well, he heard my desperate plea
And decided to answer me
In the most incredible way he could.
He sent me down an angel in disguise.
This angel carried a missing piece, just the right size.
There is something true about you
It spreads over my soul into my trust
Needing to taste the sweetness of your care, I must.
You’ve held me tight
And treasured me with all your might.
And every time I look at you I see,
A smart, successful, and loving man in front of me.
Now it has been one amazing year
Completed with a smile, kiss, and a tear.
I’m lucky to have had your love from the start
And for my gift I give you my heart,
Though I can’t wrap it in a box with a bow,
There is no doubt that
I love you more than you’ll ever know.Love Always,
Holly
| On June 6th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This is very good |
| On March 19th 2007 spasm01 Said : | |
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wow. i mean wow. i am okay at writing,but i cant ever rhyme the stuff. it always came out cheesy. god job. loved it. |
| On February 23rd 2007 CkunandBchan Said : | |
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i think you are an amazing writer and that id like to get to know you personally a bit more we could probably become great friends ;) |


