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Already dead

Views (293) Anger Created on 6-13-07 Flag
Lonely and hurt,
Broken I remain
Residing in hell,
living in pain...

Masked by lies,
I slowly fade away...
The nightmare I live with,
each and every day

The meaning of it all,
to which my mind attends,
Has not one answer
that I fully comprehend...

The bottom of my mind
holds the answers which I call,
I keep reaching towards it
in this never-ending fall...

"Stay strong and keep going,
it's never too late"...
No one seems to realize
that it's not worth the wait

There's no such thing
as help outside of your mind,
It's you against yourself,
with your demons intertwined

It's a battle, hard fought,
but never to be won...
Either way you end up losing
when it's all said and done

"Too late" came and passed...
and, of me, nothing more
I wrote my own ending,
and I shut my own door...

"Live your life to its fullest"
that's what they all said,
But what's the point in trying
when you're already dead?
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On July 3rd 2007 Cindylou46 Said :
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This poem was written by a poet from P&Q also Rolo the URL for this stolen poem is. http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=273851 This one will also be reported.
On June 21st 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter great work
On June 15th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Incredible poem
On June 15th 2007 kantokah Said :
kantokah this is very good. i've noticed u have a very strong set stucture. i was just wondering how u followit so well. is it hard to do or is that the way it flows?
On June 15th 2007 adenragsdale Said :
adenragsdale Give me some feed back on mine if you would.
Thanks.

Short &&Sweet.

--Aden.
On June 15th 2007 adenragsdale Said :
adenragsdale Nice.
I like it.

--Aden.
On June 15th 2007 timmycat57 Said :
timmycat57 Just one thing young man there is always a tomorrow and when you wake up smile again, you are alive!!!God bless you. Death is a strong word there is not return. I can tell you that for my own experience.....
On June 14th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx good poem
On June 14th 2007 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic amazing! you express your feelings so good through your writings... i love it
On June 14th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said :
thatonegirl84 I love it.
On June 14th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 Just to let you all know the divorce has been over for a while I wrote this right after. Just stumbled across it last night.
On June 13th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said :
DIXIEDEVILWEND YOUR POEMS ALL TOUCH SOMETHING DEEP WITHIN ME. BUT THIS 1 REALLY DOES. I FEEL YOUR PAIN. AND I'M VERY SORRY U HAVE FELT THIS:(
On June 13th 2007 Stormece Said :
Stormece Wow. That is really good. You put yourself into your writing, and that is great. Everything will be ok though, just keep trying. Don't give up. Also, you really know how to use rhyming and make it work. Most people can't do that. Most people end up wreking certain things with that technique.
On June 13th 2007 JEREMYPV28 Said :
JEREMYPV28 Its a good poem i just dont agree with the last stanza but thats my opinion..... Sometimes I think I'm DEAD BUT SOMETHING always happens that makes me say or think the opposite.....by the way just cuz your divorced dont mean your life is over!!
On June 13th 2007 Glork21 Said :
Glork21 wow. that is awesome!
On June 13th 2007 lozza100 Said :
lozza100 wow ... that's all i have to say. that last stanza stands out loads. awesome.
On June 13th 2007 jillie4evabib Said :
jillie4evabib No way , That last stanza is soooo true. I thihnk you should go into writing poetry oor books or something. I feel sorry for you though, don't worry you'll get through your divorce!=0