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I wrote this after my divorce

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Missing you

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Sitting alone in this midnight train
Traveling in my daily nightmares
Looking out the bleeding window
Haunting memories pasted in layers

All these years spent loving only you
Can't believe you walked out the door
Visions of you with him, burnt in my mind
Turning away, me crumpled on the floor

Being pushed from this cloud of love
When I close my eyes,hit the ground
Though I keep falling faster than time
Still crash to memories without sound

Would have given up my life for you
You vowed that you would never leave
Yet here I am so cold and alone
Your words of love I always believed

No faith in God no trust in Love
Still breathing as life has just begun
Unleash sadness from my black heart
Or am I past the point of no return

Please come back to me my love
Can't live on memories of yesterdays
Needing your love back in my heart
Praying you'll come back to stay

Tired of drowning in my own tears
Pictures of your face fading away
Hope to come out of this midnight train
With your hands in mine someday


Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
Always needed you here with me
To our love I'll always be true
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On July 3rd 2007 Cindylou46 Said :
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You are such a fake. How can you say you have written these. This poem is also a collab between myself and End Of Eternity. Posted on P&Q also it is a contest winner and on the front page of the site. here is the URL http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=868335 Remove this piece of writing. Copyright violations apply.
On June 21st 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter wonderful work
On June 15th 2007 xentaga Said :
xentaga this is really good... you should submit your poems on poetry.com you can make money off of it and get your poems in books I know I have a poem in a book.
On June 14th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx i like it good job
On June 14th 2007 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic your ex wife made a big mistake leaving you... i can see from your poetry how much you loved her.
On June 14th 2007 slcastro Said :
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this is realy good.
On June 14th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 Thanks again
On June 14th 2007 burtongirlll Said :
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divorce is full of pain and loss...somedays you wonder how you will ever survive..other days you wonder why it was so easy for the other person to just walk away from the life the two of you had made...
On June 13th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said :
DIXIEDEVILWEND DAMN, U R GOOD. I FEEL WHAT U FEEL, AS I READ IT. I'VE BEEN THERE. SO I KNOW HOW DEEP THE ROOTS OF LOVE CAN GO. LUV IT!! YOUR FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!
On June 13th 2007 bobcatfreek16 Said :
bobcatfreek16 omg seriously these poems reflect all my thoughts about everything.. *tears
On June 13th 2007 JessicaK9 Said :
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wow! very touching. Keep up the good work
On June 13th 2007 Stormece Said :
Stormece This is very, very, very good. Wonderful imagery and feeling. You write good.
On June 13th 2007 Glork21 Said :
Glork21 wow.you express yourself so well in this poem.
On June 13th 2007 jillie4evabib Said :
jillie4evabib I can't believe she left you
I feel sorry for her because she probably won't know what you did for her
Ur deep but that is something I like about guys
On June 13th 2007 lozza100 Said :
lozza100 i love your poem.
On June 13th 2007 soon2bmogirl Said :
soon2bmogirl all i can say is WOW!
On June 13th 2007 SimplePlan4evr Said :
SimplePlan4evr wow dude that is deep... but really good
On June 13th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 thanks for voting for my poem
On June 13th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 I'm glad you liked it.
On June 13th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said :
thatonegirl84 WoW. Very deep. I love it.