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Reality |
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Yesterday |
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If life was a dream |
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Missing you |
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Already dead |
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The poets' heart |
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The wondering mind |
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Is it Love or is it True Love |
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Embracement of the Heart |
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The Heart and Mind of Pain |
Yesterday
Ripped and taped up feelings
for things we just cant face
fallen but not yet broken
are the memories we cant erase
lost but not forgotten
are the places we used to stay
gone but not forever
is tomorrow's yesterday
but time is moving slowly
and I'm trapped behind closed doors
I don't want to remember
anything from before
I feel like Ive betrayed you
because I want to leave this place
and somehow staying here
is just too much for me to take
so heres your static lullaby
heres your empty heart
im letting go of everything
that's made me fall apart
this is my silent goodbye
I bid my memories adieu
cause I'm better off happy
somewhere I cant remember you
ripped and torn up feelings
are the things that we face
fallen chipped and broken
are the memories we erase
lost and now forgotten
are the places we used to stay
gone right now forever
are memories of yesterday
| On May 12th 2008 1ambeer1 Said : | |
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i really dont think i've ever seen a guy write something with so much heart in it! great job! ;) |
| On December 29th 2007 rockergirl929 Said : | |
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nice poem sad...but very good.i luv how u wirte ur poems and how it just flows. |
| On July 3rd 2007 Cindylou46 Said : | |
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This one is stolen also. How can you sit and take praise for things you did not write? This is written by Elizabeth here is the URL for her poemhttp://www.fropper.com/posts/4417 I will let her know you have again violated copyright laws.
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| On June 23rd 2007 blushgirl Said : | |
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i can totally relate to this poem, awesome stuff xx |
| On June 21st 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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very nice work |
| On June 14th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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wish i could give you 2 thumbs up |
| On June 14th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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oh my fucking god, this is really good! |
| On June 14th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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i like it |
| On June 14th 2007 numba1chic Said : | |
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you continue to amaze me |
| On June 14th 2007 dirtyd321 Said : | |
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Thank you all, I'm just glad you all like my work. |
| On June 13th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said : | |
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I HAVE NEVER SEEN A GUY PUT HIS FEELINGS INTO WORDS THE WAY U DO. U R AMAZING!!!!!! |
| On June 13th 2007 bobcatfreek16 Said : | |
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you are amazing you make me speechless and everything in all your poems just really hits home. i love it. |
| On June 13th 2007 Glork21 Said : | |
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i love it. You are an amazing writer |
| On June 13th 2007 dirtyd321 Said : | |
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I just wrote it but it is how I felt about a certain situation and how I feel about that same situation now. |
| On June 12th 2007 loudprep Said : | |
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this is amazing...did you just write it or is it directly to someone... |


