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Views (414) Fear Created on 6-12-07 Flag

There is something that needs to be said

about all this hatered and death,

It takes alot just to see the shit

all the rapings, murder and meth,

This world is very beatiful

all the people, places, and things,

but what makes me wonder about this place

are the angels without there wings,

They're are millions of people out there that  know right from wrong,

but still they keep on killing and marching to wrong song

The ones that know the difference,

are the ones that sit and watch

they see all these people dieing and they pray that it comes to a stop,

Happiness is something we strive for,

and pain we're more likely to see

But we've got people to help us right,

thats the question that keeps coming to me

The system that we follow is no longer true and pure,

so I stop and think and wonder will we ever find a cure

We were given tools to grow and become strong,

but the way that we use our tools is all so totally wrong,

The help that we are looking for stands alone in the reflection we see

but we are to damn worried about who the person next to use will be,

Take a look around you, our dreams are fading away

It'll all come to a drastic end on that one special day,

You can change everything you do by doing what you say,

just make sure what you say and do all lead in the right way

People this world is dieing,

and with it, it will take you

so make sure your that angel to help make your own dreams come true,

I hope this all sinks in

and I hope it does some good,

I can't expect it to turn out that way, but the Bible says it could

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On June 21st 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter very true nice job
On June 18th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 WOW..this will surely touch alot of people..i love poems like these that make u sit back and ponder
On June 14th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx it has alot of passion to it and great rhythem, nicely done
On June 14th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx i likeit
On June 14th 2007 kantokah Said :
kantokah i have to say ur messege is very true. i enjoy ur style. its very distinct and i just wonder it this is done on purpose or naturally? i have never had a good sence of structure, is it hard to maintain? i'm just wondering, anything i can learn from is welcome.
On June 14th 2007 adenragsdale Said :
adenragsdale I like how the ending ended.
I'm very into my faith.
It gave me an inspiring inspiration.
I loved it.

--Aden.
On June 13th 2007 DIXIEDEVILWEND Said :
DIXIEDEVILWEND THIS IA A POEM THAT COULD CHANGE THE LIVES OF MANY PEOPLE. U MAY HELP SOMEONE WITH THIS & NEVER KNOW IT. SO 4 THAT I SAY THANK YOU, FROM ME & ALL THE LIVES THIS POEM IS SURE 2 TOUCH.
On June 13th 2007 bobcatfreek16 Said :
bobcatfreek16 .............? i dont think this is supposed to make me cry but it does.
On June 12th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said :
SoulRevival18 great work! and i agree! there are way to many good people out there that do nothing. someone once said "evil is a terrible thing, but what may be worse is when the good people in this world sit idly by and do nothing about it." i think they would like your poetry too.
On June 12th 2007 hannah2sam Said :
hannah2sam this is amazing, you are a very good poet and what you have to say is so true, if only everyone could read this, maybe it could change someones mind or heart. keep it up.
On June 12th 2007 loudprep Said :
loudprep this is really good...and so very true...
On June 12th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 Thanks
On June 12th 2007 soon2bmogirl Said :
soon2bmogirl this is amazing! my sons is goin 2 grow up in this world 2 with all tha fightin and vilance and drugs.
On June 12th 2007 JEREMYPV28 Said :
JEREMYPV28 i wish i could vote 5 times for this but i cant
On June 12th 2007 JEREMYPV28 Said :
JEREMYPV28 yo i liked this poem alot i just saw it on the front page of testriffic and started to read it becuz i drift in and out of reality too much..... u know what u should try n make this into a song or something dude.... maybe fine tune it into lyrics i dunno it just spoke to me loud n clear!!!! and i aint jokin!!
On June 12th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 I wrote another a few days ago I just posted it, It's called Yesterday, please read it and tell me what you think
On June 12th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said :
thatonegirl84 This is definitely an amazing poem. It's so true. These are things I think about as well, just couldn't find the words to put it in. Great job!
On June 12th 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 I was thinking of my son just a few minutes ago and it just hit me so I just wrote.
On June 12th 2007 Megg10500 Said :
Megg10500 wow this is actually really amazing and totaly true...im left speechless after reading this...amazing job