diet7up

This is my first attempt

+10

My Poems

+ 10	LIFE IS GOOD
+ 10	DOG TAGS
+ 8	EIGHT LEGGED FREAK!
+ 10	PLEAS DON'T MAKE ME HAVE TO CHOOSE

LIFE IS GOOD

Views (110)

Created on 7-31-07

Flag

Happy family of three could not ask for more

Even when times are sore,

Life is Good to me

Money is slim but at least I have them

Life is Good

I was give a second chance for happiness

and I'm going to make sure that I don't waist it.

Live life to the fullest because

Life is Good

Please Login to post comments

On August 21st 2007 babycrzzy Said :

	great poem and it is true only right now i dont have a spouse or child yet but i think any life would be good with the ones you love the most and they love you^_^ keep writing

On August 2nd 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :

	I have to agree with 500nets brutal honesty. It did seem a bit forced. I typically don't comment on form unless specifically asked. I liked and enjoyed the thought behind the poem tho. =)

On July 31st 2007 500nets Said :

	its nice for a first poem, first sequence of rhymes seemed forced, but thats o.k. since it is that you just lost your rhyme virginity, i like "money is slim but at least i have them" it sounds like part of the chorus of a successful country song, honestly when i saw you had a poem up i was ready to be embarrased for you, but you have proven me wrong, keep writing

On July 31st 2007 missangel789 Said :

	wow i liek dis its like even tho ya poor ya still happy coz y ave ya family i liek it :)

On July 31st 2007 diet7up Said :

	I TRYED PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ;>)