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Created on 4-6-08
a boy... a busted his whole life
a girl...a banded from life
both meet up one night
when they got to the light
they saw christ
they fell to there knees
the both cried
they found out how they both died
the boy... in a drive by
the girl... in jail beaten to death
christ said that this was ment to be
now you are to gther for all eternity
Please Login to post comments| On May 31st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awwww,it's like me and my husband.love it |
| On May 31st 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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the message in this is real good, it could be a bit better but the message in it, the concept, definitely makes up for it |
