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Created: 09/17 2008
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Category: Pain

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My Sad Love Song

You're making it hard for me to leave.
You're making it hard for me to breath.
I was in love when I was blind.
But now I'm starting to see.
That you and I
Don't get along.
I do you right
You do me wrong.
This is the
Price you pay
You have my love
Then throw it away.

Now I don't want
To be me and you.
I trusted you
Had love in you.
I let you know
I loved you so.
But I don't feel like that no more.

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I was writing a song but I don't know how to end it.If I get a ending I'll post it up here,but,idk,tell me what you think about this.Please and thank you.

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On March 16th 2009 KaytlynnMM Said: 
KaytlynnMM i love it is so cute
On October 1st 2008 edwardlover92 Said: 
edwardlover92 beautiful, I like it just the way it is
On September 21st 2008 lovedaisy Said: 
lovedaisy i loved it
On September 18th 2008 strgrl28 Said: 
strgrl28 awwwww. it's a really good poem but i think these would make even better lyrics. well done
On September 17th 2008 lalarubio23 Said: 
lalarubio23 this is really good =)
On September 17th 2008 rosebrugh Said: 
rosebrugh i like it