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6ft under water
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Created on 11-1-07
all you ever wanted
is someone to truely look up to you
but six feet under water
is keeping you from seeing the true love i have for you.
why do yuo treat me like this?
i gave you my life literaly to you
and i guess our love together wasnt supposed to be like this unbliss.
what if i wanted to break
laguh it all off in your face what would you do ?
what if i fell to the floor couldnt take it any more what would you do?
what if i told you i loved you but yet
you never cared i might as well just
lay there stupidly watching you laugh and stare
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