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Created on 10-28-07
lying there on the ground
you think no one can see you.
yet you know they are staring at you
like your some type of maniac
its 1 mintue passed 3
and your already bleeding
doctors huddling around u tubes in u feeding
but all u did was imagine something bad happening to u but it wasnt there
just you lying stupisl watching everyones stare.
''im sorry but with u laying there i dont think noone cares.''
yes thats what the want u to think but u cant
your to dead to think your just lying there stupidly wait for the red light to blink
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