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the way u left me hanging
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Created on 10-28-07
i hate u
why u ask its becos u left me there
u left me there watching me stare at ur blank luaghing face
i regret it badly
but snece u did that i killed myself sadly
Please Login to post comments| On October 28th 2007 stics917 Said : | |
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i like the emotion,but try to fix the typos |
