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Look To The Sky |
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Look To The Sky
Sometimes I look to the sky,
Try to find a reason why.
Things happen when they do,
How people say, "I Love You."
Without knowing the meanin,
Let alone the real reason.
Why they're saying it aloud,
Yet without thinking, they let it out.
Not knowing how bad it hurts,
To care yet get kicked to the curb.
So I'm tryna make it known,
By writing another poem.
Hopin that it's read by eyes,
Who've commited the crime,
Of hurting someone who cared,
For them and tried to share,
Everything they had with them,
But were stupid enough to let it end.
It happens everyday, a crime,
That causes the worst lies,
Stirs up the saddest cries,
And has some wishing they'd die.
But I'm here to tell you to hold on,
Don't let it bring you down, stay strong.
Cause through all the bad in the world,
You can always count on The Lord.
So whenever you start to feel weak,
Can't find any words to speak.
Raise your head and close your eyes,
Open your mind to him and look to the sky.
The only one who will always love you,
Never tell you a lie, and always stay true.
So put your faith in him, say a prayer,
Let him in your heart, so he'll always be there.
Because once you do that, (it's true)
God will always have your back. (No matter what you do.)
| On September 13th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said : | |
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k ima stop reading ur poems for the night cuz otherwise ppl gon be like this fool says all her poems are tight:-p...but this is another great one..actually liked this one more then most..loved the flow..loved the meaning and just overall it was a good good poem...AND..i saw u had musiq soulchild "love" in ur playlist jukebox thingy...this would work as like a pefect interlude for that song..but great topic n everything |
| On August 22nd 2008 teresa45102 Said : | |
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i wrote a poem very similiar once!! |
| On August 20th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said : | |
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oh my goodnesss I LOVE IT SO MUCH !!! it's so true!! |
| On August 1st 2008 MSTINK614 Said : | |
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OMG...UR POEMS R SO AWESOME N TRUE...REALLY KEEP DOIN YA THANG!! |
| On July 25th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is a awesome poem i agree with the comment below mine the rhyming is amazing good job! |
| On June 28th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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oh wow this awesome nice rhyming |
| On June 11th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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loved it, wonderful |
| On June 1st 2008 Yanisaur Said : | |
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Faith and Reality combined = Perfect :) |
| On May 12th 2008 lonestarwaltzi Said : | |
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enjoyed
:) |
| On May 11th 2008 audica Said : | |
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love it! |
| On May 8th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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wow.....that's like, all I can think of to say....this poem is incredible |
| On May 6th 2008 lovestruck1619 Said : | |
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well i don't believe in god but i like it |
| On February 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Amen to that! |
| On June 9th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the hope that this poem carries! It is beautiful |
| On May 28th 2007 sarahrose577 Said : | |
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i like thi syou ran awsome poet |
| On May 15th 2007 Fallenangel24x Said : | |
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This is really great. Nice work. I think your a great poet. If I could I'd rate you 10 times, but I can't. Once again, great poem. If you would like to, you can see mine. |
| On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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all of your work is fantastic. you are a wonderful writier, and a great poet. |
| On May 14th 2007 angelfoot Said : | |
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it's really nice you should take a look a mine |
| On May 13th 2007 joshuamcilhagg Said : | |
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wow that poem is really really good it is the truest poem i have read in a long time please come and read my poem called what is true love and comment on it please u are a really good poet dont ever let anyone tell u diffrent have a nice day |
| On May 13th 2007 randolfdarnell Said : | |
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this is very nice, i like how you give credit to the Lord, and i hope you're talking about Jesus too! |
| On May 10th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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i never did say "i love you" to anyone yet. im saving it for someone who really loves me. this is an awesome poem!!!! |
| On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Great Poem...sounds like the same message I wrote through my poem the Guy From the Sky. |
| On May 9th 2007 Dempsey5 Said : | |
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I like it a lot i just wrote another one if you wanna check it out thanks for the comment |
| On May 8th 2007 ssjscotty Said : | |
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thats cool wish i could write poems like you |
| On April 5th 2007 hazeykrystal Said : | |
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you and me need to have a writing session....i feel everything u write....and wow.. im speachless |


