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Look To The Sky

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Sometimes I look to the sky,

Try to find a reason why.

Things happen when they do,

How people say, "I Love You."

Without knowing the meanin,

Let alone the real reason.

Why they're saying it aloud,

Yet without thinking, they let it out.

Not knowing how bad it hurts,

To care yet get kicked to the curb.

 

So I'm tryna make it known,

By writing another poem.

Hopin that it's read by eyes,

Who've commited the crime,

Of hurting someone who cared,

For them and tried to share,

Everything they had with them,

But were stupid enough to let it end.

 

It happens everyday, a crime,

That causes the worst lies,

Stirs up the saddest cries,

And has some wishing they'd die.

But I'm here to tell you to hold on,

Don't let it bring you down, stay strong.

Cause through all the bad in the world,

You can always count on The Lord.

 

So whenever you start to feel weak,

Can't find any words to speak.

Raise your head and close your eyes,

Open your mind to him and look to the sky.

The only one who will always love you,

Never tell you a lie, and always stay true.

So put your faith in him, say a prayer,

Let him in your heart, so he'll always be there.

Because once you do that, (it's true)

God will always have your back. (No matter what you do.) 

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On September 13th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said :
lyrikaldisastr k ima stop reading ur poems for the night cuz otherwise ppl gon be like this fool says all her poems are tight:-p...but this is another great one..actually liked this one more then most..loved the flow..loved the meaning and just overall it was a good good poem...AND..i saw u had musiq soulchild "love" in ur playlist jukebox thingy...this would work as like a pefect interlude for that song..but great topic n everything
On August 22nd 2008 teresa45102 Said :
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i wrote a poem very similiar once!!
On August 20th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 oh my goodnesss I LOVE IT SO MUCH !!! it's so true!!
On August 1st 2008 MSTINK614 Said :
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OMG...UR POEMS R SO AWESOME N TRUE...REALLY KEEP DOIN YA THANG!!
On July 25th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is a awesome poem i agree with the comment below mine the rhyming is amazing good job!
On June 28th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said :
angelofpurity5 oh wow this awesome nice rhyming
On June 11th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia loved it, wonderful
On June 1st 2008 Yanisaur Said :
Yanisaur Faith and Reality combined = Perfect :)
On May 12th 2008 lonestarwaltzi Said :
lonestarwaltzi enjoyed :)
On May 11th 2008 audica Said :
audica love it!
On May 8th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop wow.....that's like, all I can think of to say....this poem is incredible
On May 6th 2008 lovestruck1619 Said :
lovestruck1619 well i don't believe in god but i like it
On February 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Amen to that!
On June 9th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love the hope that this poem carries! It is beautiful
On May 28th 2007 sarahrose577 Said :
sarahrose577 i like thi syou ran awsome poet
On May 15th 2007 Fallenangel24x Said :
Fallenangel24x This is really great. Nice work. I think your a great poet. If I could I'd rate you 10 times, but I can't. Once again, great poem. If you would like to, you can see mine.
On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 all of your work is fantastic. you are a wonderful writier, and a great poet.
On May 14th 2007 angelfoot Said :
angelfoot it's really nice you should take a look a mine
On May 13th 2007 joshuamcilhagg Said :
joshuamcilhagg wow that poem is really really good it is the truest poem i have read in a long time please come and read my poem called what is true love and comment on it please u are a really good poet dont ever let anyone tell u diffrent have a nice day
On May 13th 2007 randolfdarnell Said :
randolfdarnell this is very nice, i like how you give credit to the Lord, and i hope you're talking about Jesus too!
On May 10th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman i never did say "i love you" to anyone yet. im saving it for someone who really loves me. this is an awesome poem!!!!
On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Great Poem...sounds like the same message I wrote through my poem the Guy From the Sky.
On May 9th 2007 Dempsey5 Said :
Dempsey5 I like it a lot i just wrote another one if you wanna check it out thanks for the comment
On May 8th 2007 ssjscotty Said :
ssjscotty thats cool wish i could write poems like you
On April 5th 2007 hazeykrystal Said :
hazeykrystal you and me need to have a writing session....i feel everything u write....and wow.. im speachless