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Revived My Feelings

Views (562) Passion Created on 5-14-07 Flag
I don't wanna scare you off,
So promise you'll understand,
When I say you made me soft,
Soft inside once again.

I told myself it was hopeless,
No one would ever care for me,
Just a few of my old thoughts till,
You helped me see.

Never leave you to dangle,
Cause God blessed me, that's true,
The day he sent me an angel,
And my angel that is you.

Want to get lost in your eyes,
Fall softly into your arms,
Show you truth instead of lies,
And set off your hearts alarm.

Slowly becoming my everything,
The greatest human in my mind,
Do anything if you stay with me,
Cause you're the soul I hold inside.

So take my hand, ease my pain,
I'll give you the love you deserve,
Keep it real, never play games,
And I promise you I'd never hurt.

No words can explain it,
The feeling that I feel for you,
So look in my eyes believe this,
Feeling I have is true.

Let me touch you with my hand,
So maybe then, maybe then,
You'll be able to understand,
That this feeling will never end.

Let me put my lips on yours,
Show you the passionate fire,
That keeps growing more,
With you being my hearts desire.

Let me prove to you that you,
Revived my feelings from the dead,
By letting me give you proof,
Of everything that I have just said.
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On June 6th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx this is beautiful!
On May 21st 2007 Pushpop09 Said :
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I really like it
On May 16th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Beautiful, I love it.
On May 16th 2007 Lillette087 Said :
Lillette087 omg i love this makes me feel all the love that i have for my boyfriend is true
On May 16th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Very Good!
On May 16th 2007 cass2010 Said :
cass2010 Sweat
On May 15th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Lovely. You are top notch!
On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 I love it, it shows love as long as the other trusts, and shows what a true relationships should be made of, from my eyes at least. can't wait to read the rest of these.
On May 15th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman how sweet :)
On May 14th 2007 phhs2010marie Said :
phhs2010marie OMG D!!! your FLIPPIN amazazing!!!! It makes me wanna cry but in a very good way....so good sweetie =]
On May 14th 2007 Karaokekat Said :
Karaokekat I like it...
On May 14th 2007 dark013angel Said :
dark013angel you have major talent hun...use it...if i was that good imd be writing all the time...i loved this btw lol
On May 14th 2007 razorbladexXx Said :
razorbladexXx amazing dear.
On May 14th 2007 singershaw1239 Said :
singershaw1239 wow. thats really good. i wish that my poems were that good. you tru;y have a gift. use it.
On May 14th 2007 x3debbix3 Said :
x3debbix3 this is awesome!
On May 14th 2007 insanepixie86 Said :
insanepixie86 I like it. I loved the begining, and how you explain it thoughout the poem.
On May 14th 2007 500nets Said :
500nets the 5th stanza is great
On May 14th 2007 Yanks19 Said :
Yanks19 I agree with the person below me its another good one
On May 14th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Another good one!
On May 14th 2007 Pushpop09 Said :
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wow...this poem sounds so much like the one I wrote my boyfriend saturday night. I'mma put it up tomorrow. I hope you read it n tell me what you think. This is a good poem, I hope you really feel the way you write.