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We'll Fly

Views (938) Passion Created on 5-12-07 Flag
I can't seem to let go of you,
And the harder I try,
The harder it is to do.
Tried to let go of the memories,
Talks we've had and everything,
But you're stuck on my mind,
Heart, body and soul,
And it seems I couldn't get by,
Without you,
I thought that you should know.
Can't stand to be alone,
Unless I'm alone with you,
And everytime I pick up the phone,
It's you I want to talk to.
My house is no longer a home,
Because you're not here,
You're what my heart chose,
Without it having a fear.
So what I must ask,
From you my sweet dear,
Is give me your hand and grasp,
As we go through wonderful years,
I and you, you and I,
From strangers to lovers,
And as two lovers we'll fly.
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On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 If I keep reading this stuff i think i may just get into poetry. This is great, and explains exactly how i feel for someone right now.
On May 14th 2007 Stephen0805 Said :
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May I post this in my writing blog on myspace?
On May 13th 2007 Lilie627 Said :
Lilie627 i really like it
On May 13th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman im touched... really. :)
On May 12th 2007 Yanks19 Said :
Yanks19 this is really good
On May 12th 2007 suicidalslug Said :
suicidalslug so sweet
On May 12th 2007 Karaokekat Said :
Karaokekat nice
On May 12th 2007 singershaw1239 Said :
singershaw1239 this really touched me. it is the same way that i feel about my ex. good job. this is wonderful. like sad, but wonderful
On May 12th 2007 TaiMe2 Said :
TaiMe2 Beautiul! it can be a Song , U Kno.! I liked it. kudos
On May 12th 2007 xZombiex666 Said :
xZombiex666 this is great
On May 12th 2007 mikehill1984 Said :
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spot on i can relate to the whole poem
On May 12th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg I love it...it is really good!
On May 12th 2007 goldfishmurder Said :
goldfishmurder Love the part about the phone. I can really relate to that. Great work here.
On May 12th 2007 usseal Said :
usseal i like it
On May 12th 2007 christopher199 Said :
christopher199 id give u 10 tumbs up but u can only put in 1 at a time :(
On May 12th 2007 christopher199 Said :
christopher199 wow its awsum i read it 4 times it was so good
On May 12th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo I like it. Your work has soul!
On May 12th 2007 SeekterBeeker Said :
SeekterBeeker the lover is a gorilla right? jk. this is good stuff. do you know this person or are they a preminition of love?
On May 12th 2007 Lillette087 Said :
Lillette087 cute
On May 12th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I loved it~