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What You Are To Me
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Created on 3-2-07
You're what makes the world spin,
What gives me ambition to win.
Sturdier than gravity,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
As serious as the ozone,
What will never let love leave me alone.
More beautiful than the sea,
As important as Martin Luther King,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
More of a sight to see than the stars,
As sexy as a red sports car.
As cute as a new born baby,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
Who I want to see grow old,
The only hand I want to hold.
Witness your dreams turn to goals,
And be your fire in your soul.
Cause you are the truth,
The stars, the face in the moon.
The sun, the waves in the sea,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
You are love, my passion,
The blood in my veins and,
The beat in my heart can't you see,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
Beautifuler than words can say,
Whose in my prayers every day.
Who makes the days that are ugly,
Seem and feel oh so lovely,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
Who I want to hold in my arms,
Keep in safety, away from harm.
The one who sets off the alarm,
That welcomes love in my heart.
Baby, that's what you are to me.
What gives me ambition to win.
Sturdier than gravity,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
As serious as the ozone,
What will never let love leave me alone.
More beautiful than the sea,
As important as Martin Luther King,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
More of a sight to see than the stars,
As sexy as a red sports car.
As cute as a new born baby,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
Who I want to see grow old,
The only hand I want to hold.
Witness your dreams turn to goals,
And be your fire in your soul.
Cause you are the truth,
The stars, the face in the moon.
The sun, the waves in the sea,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
You are love, my passion,
The blood in my veins and,
The beat in my heart can't you see,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
Beautifuler than words can say,
Whose in my prayers every day.
Who makes the days that are ugly,
Seem and feel oh so lovely,
Baby, this is what you are to me.
Who I want to hold in my arms,
Keep in safety, away from harm.
The one who sets off the alarm,
That welcomes love in my heart.
Baby, that's what you are to me.
Please Login to post comments| On February 27th 2008 rsammy28 Said : | |
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nice!!!! |
| On June 6th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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wow you are too good! |
| On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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i like the setup for this one a little more, because its almost like a song, with a chorus. |
| On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Really Deep and pretty! |
| On May 10th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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awww... i love this poem!!! |
| On May 8th 2007 Karaokekat Said : | |
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I like this one... |
| On May 8th 2007 ssjscotty Said : | |
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not bad im sure everyone else said something about the beautifuler thing but who cares its still good |
| On April 8th 2007 Scrapper9494 Said : | |
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I really really like this. This actually conveys feelings I have for someone right now. |
| On March 16th 2007 JenMoe Said : | |
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Very nice. I like. Keep it up. |
| On March 11th 2007 sammies843 Said : | |
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Just check your wording, and grammar. It's great!! Keep it up!!
~Sammies843 |
| On March 9th 2007 Paul4379 Said : | |
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there's nothing wrong with what you said. it needs more focus. what does one metaphor have to do with another. why are they the ones you chose? you need more intentionality in terms of content and structure.
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| On March 7th 2007 MyLilRae Said : | |
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This is really great. I like it a lot... i mean, of course there are a few kinks... they've all got them. But ultimately I love it. Keep up the great work! |
| On March 6th 2007 Codababy Said : | |
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Awesome. One of the better stuffs I've read on testriffic. Keep it up. |
| On March 5th 2007 suicidalslug Said : | |
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Very good. As you said, it seems a lot of feeling was put into this...but I wonder...is beautifuler actually a word? Wouldnt it be "more beautiful"? |
| On March 5th 2007 tigerbaby7644 Said : | |
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wow this is really good...i like it |
| On March 5th 2007 Uagirl5992 Said : | |
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Awesome |
| On March 4th 2007 babygurlblue Said : | |
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i loves it gurl its very nice keep it up |
| On March 3rd 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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i agree with the comment under this one. =] |
| On March 3rd 2007 JeffLip Said : | |
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amazing job, nice rhyme pattern. i wish more people actually applied what they've learned from english classes to their work like you do, it would make for a lot better work on here. |
| On March 3rd 2007 Kittylace Said : | |
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I agree with s3nt3nc3d. The poem flowed beautifully!! |
| On March 3rd 2007 kissinger06 Said : | |
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i love you!
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| On March 3rd 2007 bakandbetter Said : | |
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WELL IGUESS I NEVER LOOKED AT IT THAT WAY I ALWAYS DO THEM ABOUT PAIN AND RARELY LOVE sorry for da other comment
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| On March 3rd 2007 bakandbetter Said : | |
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sorry i maybe new at this but it is not good at all it ryhmes with phony shit not the real world so pull your head out ya ass and write good stuff |
| On March 3rd 2007 NickCamp Said : | |
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nice i have my loving side to ill get better at caring one day |
| On March 2nd 2007 NisaNicole Said : | |
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i like it a lot. very detailed =D great job |
