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I Can Be Your
You can be Spider-Man,
And I can be Mary-Jane,
Or, I can be the player,
And you can be the game.
Be your rim to your goal,
Or the DJ to your radio,
Your body to your soul,
And the green to your go.
You can be the wheels,
And I can be the car,
Or, I can be the space,
And you can be my star.
Be your circle to your Saturn,
Or the galaxy to your quest,
Your heated fire to the burn,
And the heart to your chest.
And I can be Mary-Jane,
Or, I can be the player,
And you can be the game.
Be your rim to your goal,
Or the DJ to your radio,
Your body to your soul,
And the green to your go.
You can be the wheels,
And I can be the car,
Or, I can be the space,
And you can be my star.
Be your circle to your Saturn,
Or the galaxy to your quest,
Your heated fire to the burn,
And the heart to your chest.
| On August 28th 2008 moonight Said : | |
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sweet |
| On August 1st 2008 MSTINK614 Said : | |
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THIS WAS TIGHT...KEEP DOIN YA THANG |
| On July 2nd 2008 shaye2hot Said : | |
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i think this is a really good poem |
| On May 27th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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sooo beautiful |
| On May 6th 2008 lovestruck1619 Said : | |
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aw i love it :D |
| On June 6th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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this is cute!! |
| On May 20th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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This flows like a song, you should write music, I could totaly see this being a song..read it out loud and see |
| On May 20th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Lol. Nice one. I'll show this one to my man for that first verse alone! |
| On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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i love the use of modern things to show how you feel. that is wonderful |
| On May 13th 2007 Jujuberry04 Said : | |
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I love this one! Very imaginative :) |
| On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Sweet! |
| On May 9th 2007 BrokenWiingz Said : | |
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This is damn good,i like th way it rhymes |
| On May 8th 2007 ssjscotty Said : | |
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hell yeah i like |
| On February 25th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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WHOEVER RATED IT DOWN... SCREW YOU. YOU COULD'VE AT LEAST SAID, WHY YOU GAVE IT A THUMBS DOWN, ASSHOLE. |
| On February 20th 2007 randixwild Said : | |
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Aww. how sweet. I like it. |
| On February 20th 2007 Bigheadmark89 Said : | |
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I like this...man I wish I could write like you you really good |
| On February 19th 2007 Voidofinsanity Said : | |
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Thats cute, Kinda reminds me of a Hallmark card or something of the sort that you would give to your lover. |
| On February 19th 2007 rellcinko Said : | |
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awww...awesome.... |
| On February 19th 2007 Schmuckula Said : | |
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Ok. Read. Good poem. |
| On February 19th 2007 Ilovepeaches Said : | |
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i really like this. everything flows so well! great job |
| On February 18th 2007 XMarioX Said : | |
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Interesting title lead to a great poem. |
| On February 18th 2007 angelalone Said : | |
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i write a lot. and i got a poem that was NOTHING compared to this pubnlished. you should try cuz this is amazing. thumbs up |
| On February 18th 2007 mizztoniii Said : | |
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awww that is really good .. i LOVE writing poems myself.. i should get one of them on here and you can rate mine .lol .. but yeah this is really good .. keep it up |


