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Deep Inside

Views (92) Passion Created on 7-3-08 Flag
You may not know me
But I know you
I'm deep inside your soul
So dark and blue

I'm cold and tired
Rotting deep inside you, like mold
So deep that you can't smell
The stench that I hold

And I'll never let go
You're mine for the taking
Cause I have a tight grip
Tight on your soul
So now you're breaking

That evil little voice
That tells you to do things
That voice that cusses at you
Turning you to an evil being

I'll take over your body
Your soul will be mine
"Give in to my charm"
Listen to my words in your mind

I will NOT let you defeat the being that I have created
This adult that has been built, there is no debating
I am who I am and I will not let you change who I've become
My life is already a mess without your words fucking it up
You can try all you want but I'm stronger than you are
And I don't care how long you stay, you can even leave a scar
Because I was born to fight the worlds fights till the end
And I'll be the winner, standing stronger than you, my friend.


(I dont like this one that well)
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On July 7th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 you show um!! the ending was great... it is a fight within yourself...and you portrayed it so well!! i love this... i don't understand why you don't like it... anyways great as always!! =D
On July 4th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said :
xXkenzieXz I lik it but the best part is at the end...
On July 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx You don't like this? I like this! I mean I love this poem because I feel exact feeling as you have.
On July 3rd 2008 watrgrl Said :
watrgrl cool.kinda creepy.lol
On July 3rd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia This is not the best of you but its pretty deep....