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Love Like This Pt. 2

Views (162) Passion Created on 7-2-08 Flag
So there's something I wanna tell you and I need you to listen
See there's this look in my eyes everytime I look at you, they glisten
Because you're my Star, you brighten up my life and world too
Then again you are my life and my world, who
Brings me the light and I couldn't see without you
So I want to hold you tight and help you carry through
Any dangers, troubles and fights you have to fight throughout your years
So let me hold your hand and help you concure your fears
As I wipe away your tears, like you did for me just the other day
So close your eyes and let me lay on you and kiss that water away
And let me tell you that men can be beautiful because I see beauty within you
Your face, smile, your hands, body and your eyes so your soul is beautiful too
Therefore you are a beautiful man, and I know you can understand what I mean when I say this
Like the first time we touched hands, and our lips met to meet that lucious first kiss
We're blessed and I know you feel the same way and there's no other words to use to explain it any better
So I'm writing this poem, another poem about you and I and our love inside, another Four Page Letter
Cause baby I love you and I can't say it enough
So I tell you everynight hoping you can feel my love
Like the way you smell, your scent is the best taste that has ever met my nose
And this might sound strange but after I see you, I love to smell my clothes
Because I can't keep off you when we're together, therefore I smell like your body
And your body is perfection, there couldn't be one better than the one God created for me
The body that the soul of Korey Clay lies within, the one mated with me
And you are mine, my fine, strong man there's no way this could be faded for we
Love eachother more than all couples our age and most grown folk
We're one of the few that God blessed with love stronger than the Hulk
So Cupid got a Chokehold on me and yet I gained my breath yet I lose it too
Cause I get lost in your eyes and I get lost in the moment when I kiss you
Ha, and I still get butterflies before I see you, or talk on the phone
And when I'm away from you I feel alone, so its like Vandross said, "this house is not a home"
Because my home is found within your chest, your heart is my kingdom
And the only time I feel at my best is when I'm with you, and when I'm with you I feel freedom
And I become a better person, because of who you are and want to be
You helped this little girl grow into a woman that will soon be set free
Because her Prince came into her life to sweep her off her feet
Her soon to be King, and there is no other one in this entire world for me.
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On August 10th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said :
xXXxjuicyxXxXX this poem just took my breath away.
On August 6th 2008 chaotickitty12 Said :
chaotickitty12 this is so sweet! damn you're lucky. im flying solo lol :P
On July 5th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ aww thats really cute. Nice Job!
On July 3rd 2008 watrgrl Said :
watrgrl *smelling*lol
On July 2nd 2008 watrgrl Said :
watrgrl wow.that was really sweet.the part about smaelling your clothes made me chuckle.this is a beautiful poem and it made me smile.you are really lucky to have someone in your life like that.
On July 2nd 2008 speederspider Said :
speederspider Part 2 rhymes.
On July 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia My fav line is "my home is found within your chest,your heart is my kingdom." That's exactly what i feel.
On July 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia Ohhhh,so ummm what would be the word.Extremely lovely....You just state what i wanna say to my husband....I can tell that you have a very strong personality...A young woman who is madly in-love....I love this........
On July 2nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 I have officially been awake for a day and i am exhausted as hell but my word is my word. i read this. and loved it. it's a powerful passion that is a good passion to have. i have a particular liking for these kind of poems. but i am still impartial. u spelled conquer wrong but it is fine i was able to see where u were going. nice.
On July 2nd 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 oh wow. i love this more then i love the first part. i just think this is really great. just..wow. very sweet