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Sept 8th 2007 (Not spamming so plz read)

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The Day We Met

Views (66) Passion Created on 6-29-08 Flag

Written: September 10, 2007 

It was the smile on his face
The look in his eyes
"Don't make me leave this place"
Was all that was in my mind

I can't stop thinking about the look on his face
So for the past two days I do nothing but retrace
When I walked in and saw his back
Smiled to myself because of the fact
I was there, and, he was there and, it was real
He hadn't noticed me yet, but I started to feel
Shaky inside, though I thought I was ready, yet
I had to turn away, so I could catch my breath
Cause the day I've been waiting for, was finally here
I was looking at my future, he was near
Wanted to speak, but my head wasn't right
Cause all I could think about was, "There's my life."
It affected me more than I thought it would
Knew I'd be happy but, not that good
But I built up the courage and turned around
Saw him looking at me, and I heard no sounds
Its as if I blacked out when I saw his grin
Couldn't see a thing, but my greatest best friend
So he slowly walked up, and then I followed
Couldn't say a thing it was all bottled
Up, but I wanted to let it out
Had it in my head but not in my mouth
So I said, "Hello," the only thing I could say
Cause the look in his eyes had me in a daze
Figured once I saw him, I'd be alright
I could wait a while to see him, ha, yeah right
Wake up now and I see the first look
Knew I loved him but now I'm hooked
Cause even though it was awkward
And only lasted a few minutes
I love him more now and can't forget it
The day he saw me, and I saw he
Saturday September 8th, forever important to me.

Cause it was...
The smile on his face
The look in his eyes
"Don't make me leave this place"
Was all that was in my mind.

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On August 1st 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight Oh wow this is incredible. I can't really say anything smart about it...it's just all incredible.
On June 30th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop yes, what a beautiful day it was.. this memory you wrote so lovingly :)
On June 29th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 awwwwww. that says it all =]