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Created on 6-19-08
Written: June 3, 2008
I remember the days when I dreamt of the stars
And let balloons go to the Heavens for God
The simplicity of life and the innocence within me
The troubles I got myself into and the little things I achieved
How accomplished I felt when I ran and won 3rd place
When I swam in the big pool, the joy on my face
But as I grew older a void filled my heart
I needed someone who would care
I needed loving arms.
I needed the being of a man to love me
Yet the void wasn't filled, I was still incomplete
Until the day I stopped searching and you came into my life
Now the void is gone and I've found a love that's always new
A young child grew to a woman
That wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you.
Please Login to post comments| On June 30th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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awww!! what would you be if not for him, right?I have friends who make me feel this way.. hopefully a guy someday though ;)) |
| On June 20th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aww. i really liked this |
| On June 20th 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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I love this I can definitely relate to it and you wrote it beautifully |
| On June 20th 2008 CarlyMhM Said : | |
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i can def. relate to this one. a very pure poem.... |
| On June 19th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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wow, i love this..... |
| On June 19th 2008 babygurlj6 Said : | |
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nice |
| On June 19th 2008 ignorantsanity Said : | |
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nicely done :) |
| On June 19th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awwwww,LOVELY....You know,i can't swim.I'm sure when we snorkle,my husband is embarrassed because i wear lifevest.lol ehhhh,you aren't preggy,are you? |
| On June 19th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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ahhhhh to be a young cub in love ahhhh those were the days. a truly lovely write. |
| On June 19th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Nice write! I really really liked it! :) |
