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Your body would be filled with a melody

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He Said

Perfection From Heaven

Views (193) Passion Created on 5-22-08 Flag
I just want to speak these words perfectly for you
So I'd be sure they'd come out sweetly to sooth
Your soul. Your body would be filled with a melody
That only your mind knows. And perfection can't be seen
Except for in your eyes and in our dreams, so
Come close to me so I can try to speak perfect words
That will make your body quiver and yell to the world
How bad you're in need of my being as I am of yours
For you're in love with me and we're one to the core
Adore every inch of you inside and out, more than before
Lets sore in the clouds, scream aloud and shout out our love
Till the day we fall to the ground, if that day ever comes
Until then, I vow to be yours till the end for you came from, the land of
Heaven, the land that made a Perfect Angel for me
And perfection will be ours that only we can see.
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On June 19th 2008 liz720614 Said :
liz720614 great, i love it:)
On June 19th 2008 liz720614 Said :
liz720614 great, i love it:)
On June 11th 2008 berkoff62 Said :
berkoff62 hey thats aawesome
On June 10th 2008 CharTheKnight Said :
CharTheKnight I love the flow of it great job! :D
On June 1st 2008 Jullz101 Said :
Jullz101 i luv it :]
On May 29th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia very lovely
On May 26th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop so, so beautiful!! i like this alot
On May 23rd 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 aww, thats really cute. u r lucky, love like that is hard to come by. its great that u have it and cherish it.
On May 23rd 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 i loved it its very beautiful...everyone should have a love like this
On May 23rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aww its very nice
On May 23rd 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 nice poem .....love it...keep up the good work....♥....
On May 23rd 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 i enjoyed it...it its really nice, and you did an awesome job...and without a doubt it is what YOU feel and letting it out through a poem is just beautiful! again you did an awesome job!!!
On May 23rd 2008 chickp96 Said :
chickp96 That's really pretty
On May 22nd 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb awwh, how pretty indeed!
On May 22nd 2008 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 very pretty poem. i love it! great job! =]
On May 22nd 2008 N5607 Said :
N5607 Well, not to sound harsh or anything, I guess I just think all love poems are cheesy. No offense. Just an opinion. :P
On May 22nd 2008 N5607 Said :
N5607 cheesy
On May 22nd 2008 megaeden Said :
my picture
any poem aspiring to how you feel is great
On May 22nd 2008 hott555555555 Said :
hott555555555 thats so preety
On May 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 To be able to create when inspired by a symbiotic love so pure is what i endeavor for....wont happen but it's a lofty notion regardless. great work here.
On May 22nd 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei agreed. very beautiful.
On May 22nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia it's beautiful and lovely.Very nice job.