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Loneliness

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Never knew how lonely a life could be
'Til the day I recieved love and now without the
Touch of your hands grasping my waste
And your tongue touching mine
Mphm, that wonderous taste
My stare lost in the glare of your eyes
And my ear to your chest, oh my
The beat of your heart
Singing in my 'drums
I never met loneliness
Until I gained your love

Now I can't live without your touch
And I feel empty inside, without your hugs
Need to meet your eyes, again to see love
And, I feel indifferent in my mind because
I became one with you the day we first kissed
Or better yet, the day our eyes met, so blessed
To be with you in a relationship so complex
That no other being in this world could comprehend
The passion that we hold for eachother, you and I
And I swear every night that I'm not by your side
I'm losing my mind, sanity can't be found
Because you and only you, are my solid ground
The friend that I wished for, the lover I dreamed of
The gift God sent when I was ready to give up
An Angel that heals with a touch and a stare
And the beautiful Angel that strips me bare
When he's not around to give his kisses
Yes, with you not here, loneliness sinks in
And loneliness, has become my friend
Until the day I see you, once again.

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On June 8th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay
This is beautiful, the flow is wonderful, and the imagery is marvelous. Is there anything you can't do? -Lozer™=]
On May 27th 2008 hpfan731 Said :
hpfan731 wow...those are strong emotions! i don't know if i've ever been there yet.... but i'll know for sure if i'm feeling like you are in this poem!
On May 23rd 2008 lakeguy2302 Said :
lakeguy2302 Yeah not that i didn't like this poem because i really did. It just took me to a very dark and bitter place that i have been trying to get out of since Christmas. This poem truly haunts me. I would explain further but those stories are not for public consumption.
On May 18th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 i loved this! its just..wow..it was great =]
On May 18th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 O_o...XD....*_*...there are no words to express how awesome this poem is....i love it sooooo much!!! thanks for letting me know about it!!
On May 18th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 I got chills. That was so amazing. I love and know the feeling well. Great job.
On May 18th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :
McRrOxMySoX8 This is really good!
On May 17th 2008 somethingNOT Said :
somethingNOT sure, happy to leave a comment. this is really good! it sounds like it could be a song or something. So very dazzling
On May 17th 2008 KiSsEs7898 Said :
KiSsEs7898 OMG I LOVE IT ... HOW DO YOU THINK OF THESE THINGS???
On May 17th 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 wow, thats so powerful. i really love. it. its so true too, u never really feel loneliness until you find that person that makes you feel complete. great job.
On May 17th 2008 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 This is an amazing expression of your love. Good Job!! I hope you share it with him. :)
On May 17th 2008 timmybedunah Said :
timmybedunah Very well written. Bravo.
On May 17th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX it's so passionate!! i love it!!
On May 17th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 wow..really good poem. nice job
On May 17th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 i feel the same way like your so in love you need him ilove it