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The Eyes Tell It All

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Can we...Go to the beach?

Where I can look at the sun reflecting in your eyes from the water
Whisper sweet nothings in your ear...Shhh, don't bother
To worry about the cause of the stress in your life
Cause tonight is made for us, just you and I
Think of the present and the future that holds the two of us
Young teens when we met but now young adults with love
Trust in me like you've done for two years, I'll trust in you
And I won't hold any fear, and I won't scold you my dear
I'll hold you in my arms and my heart will forever be near
To you, my love, my future, my present and my past
My friend, my teacher, my world, we'll make this last
For no man, no woman, no child nor no pet
Could love me the way you love me...We're set
For life, a life with pure, real and true love
And you have no need to worry about other men for I love you, hun
I'm crazy for you, you can see it in my eyes
And I know you love me the same from the out and inside
So continue to love my soul, I'll continue to love yours
For we're meant for eachother, soulmates who were lured
Together from a higher power that we can't explain
And we have no need to complain since True love we gained
So you won't play any games and I won't tell any lies
We'll only continue to love one another, you and I
For years to come and years to pass in our lives
I love you Korey Clay, and I'll love you for life.

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On June 1st 2008 Yanisaur Said :
Yanisaur You're a GENIUS POET. Very dramatic and emotional.
On May 31st 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr magical! great work!!
On May 31st 2008 thuhchris Said :
thuhchris very cute. i love it
On May 29th 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 awww...hes lucky to have u...i love it its super sweet and great!!!♥♥♥
On May 29th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Beautiful poem. Glad I read this one.
On May 27th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 i love it it is wonderfully made and makes me think of my love
On May 27th 2008 hpfan731 Said :
hpfan731 oh my gosh, i was reading this and after the first few lines i just melted inside and i started crying! it's beautiful. no wonder this poem won the contest!
On May 14th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX it's so incredibly sweet, great job!!
On May 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 this is magnificent. pure. full of love.
On May 12th 2008 N5607 Said :
N5607 Wow. Wow wow wow wow. Amazing.
On May 12th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x aww this is so amazing! I love it. Do you mind if you could check out a few of mine? If so, that would be great! :) Nicely done overall!!
On May 12th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks aawwwwwwwww.....this is soo sweet....
On May 12th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 i love it!!!!!!!
On May 11th 2008 october1015 Said :
october1015 Sooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
On May 11th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Very sweet for sure. I loved the last line the best "and I'll love you for life" that says it all right there!!
On May 11th 2008 specialk107 Said :
specialk107 its good,
On May 11th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop awwww
On May 11th 2008 shorteternity Said :
shorteternity this is cute. 8)
On May 11th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia awwww,this is very sweet of you.He's so lucky,Great words too.I wish to write like you did.I have so mnay things in my mind that i wanted to write but i couldn't find the right words to tell. Well,can you imagine writing a poem in a different language? Sometimes i asked Mr.Webster.lol