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Created on 10-7-07
*NOTE: dont expect any actual stories 4 a while. i sprained my index finger and it hurts like heck. its killing me right now and is all swollen and krap so ya. srry. dont expect anything more than short poems for about 2 weeks. this effin hurts >.>*
Your breath lingers above me.
Your arm around me.
It feels so right to lay my head on your chest.
There’s a single star hovering above our heads.
This is so tranquil.
Everything is so perfect.
We just lay here, not speaking,
And I can feel your chest rising and falling.
All I can think about is how much I love this.
This would be so amazing…
If only..
Yes, just IF…
Your other arm wasn’t around her.
Please Login to post comments| On May 8th 2008 Nettylouise Said : | |
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great |
| On October 7th 2007 Shaff103 Said : | |
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Awwww! This is nice good job... Lol i had to stop and think about what happened then i was like ohhh! |
| On October 7th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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Wow..this is short, beautiful, and sad. I don't like, however, that you used all caps for 'if'. Also, in L5 you should omit 'This is'-it would sound a lot better and would flow easier...^_^ I really loved it, though..very powerful! |
| On October 7th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Nice word choice...Great work! |
| On October 7th 2007 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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awe!!!! wat the helll!! i like it lotzzz, i hate when guys do that i mean frickin decide! |
| On October 7th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow that was beautifully written, great poem! |
| On October 7th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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awww that sux! i would hate that to happen to me.... nicely written... |
