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i hate the person who did this

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the end of the show

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Created on 5-3-07

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i was soooo young and dumb then

u took advantage of my feelings

u stepped on me repeatedly

but i still looked at u with adoration

even though u caused so much agony

the number of times i cried

matches the number of times ive smiled

and i knew we were meant to be

but u acted like a clown

and when i see you

u want to act like a gentleman now

well u can take it and pack

cuz i want no part in this act

im really sorry though

but nows the end of the show

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On July 31st 2008 UnSane420 Said :

	this is another amazing poem its awesome i'm am speechless at this one you are very talented good job!

On May 7th 2007 tswieberg Said :

	Sad....but nice.

On May 4th 2007 mrskritter Said :

	good job