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i thought....

Views (130) Envy Created on 2-4-07 Flag

I thought I was over you

I thought the love for you was old

I thought you escaped my mind

I thought you were out of my soul

 

But when I saw you with that girl

She was beautiful and looked like a queen

But when I saw you with that girl

Jealousy came over me

 

With her long hair and perfect skin

Her body was perfect with which you could do much sin

Her lilting laugh and mesmerizing smile

I knew she was only there for a while

 

For you despised girls like that

And when you told me I agreed off the back

And now your using her to torture me

But you shouldnt have done that you'll see

 

I thought that I was over you

I thought the love for you was old

That girl was pretty especially on your arm

To bad for her for its gone...... her soul

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On July 31st 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 i love this is very strong willed i love it a lot good job!
On May 7th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Nice poem...
On May 4th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter very nice job
On February 4th 2007 Hallucingenic Said :
Hallucingenic i like it sorta sounds like wuts happening with me and my one ex lol
On February 4th 2007 dbabes Said :
dbabes comment ppl