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i thought....
I thought I was over you
I thought the love for you was old
I thought you escaped my mind
I thought you were out of my soul
But when I saw you with that girl
She was beautiful and looked like a queen
But when I saw you with that girl
Jealousy came over me
With her long hair and perfect skin
Her body was perfect with which you could do much sin
Her lilting laugh and mesmerizing smile
I knew she was only there for a while
For you despised girls like that
And when you told me I agreed off the back
And now your using her to torture me
But you shouldnt have done that you'll see
I thought that I was over you
I thought the love for you was old
That girl was pretty especially on your arm
To bad for her for its gone...... her soul
| On July 31st 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i love this is very strong willed i love it a lot good job! |
| On May 7th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Nice poem... |
| On May 4th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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very nice job |
| On February 4th 2007 Hallucingenic Said : | |
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i like it sorta sounds like wuts happening with me and my one ex lol |
| On February 4th 2007 dbabes Said : | |
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