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mommy why must i die |
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mommy why must i die
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Created on 4-1-07
mommy why
why do i
have to die?
ppl tell me that im good
you tell me im a fool
you call me names
you hit me
and deep down it hurts more and more everyday
i do not cry, cuz last time i did
daddy told me to die
he hits harder
and yells louder.
why mommy, why do i have to get in the bath
why do u hold me down
mommy i cant breath.
why is daddy smilling.
why are ppl cring.
why dont you see me
im next to you
im next to daddy.
mommy there is a light calling me
what do i do.
iwant to go in it
but i dont want to go away from you.
mommy im going now
tell daddy i said sorry.
sorry for whatever i did.
and i love you mommy.
i wish i could see you later but
they say ppl like you and daddy go someplace dark.
so dont forget a flashlight.
good bye, i love you.
Please Login to post comments| On October 10th 2007 daywalker05 Said : | |
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thx yall |
| On October 8th 2007 sorah17 Said : | |
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very well written jess! |
| On October 6th 2007 guiltyasgod Said : | |
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coool |
| On September 18th 2007 daywalker05 Said : | |
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hmmmm |
| On September 14th 2007 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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This good. The child was so sweet. All the way until the end. |
| On September 14th 2007 daywalker05 Said : | |
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thx tomo! |
| On May 21st 2007 Kitzuka Said : | |
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i still will always love this poem jessy!! |
| On April 28th 2007 missykitty1 Said : | |
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NO...SRRY |
| On April 26th 2007 daywalker05 Said : | |
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I did this poem cuz its a true story of a my cuzn he was only 3. But i wrote it in my eyes. s ya thx for the comments
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| On April 11th 2007 Vegena Said : | |
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I really like how she gets a minor bit of revenge in the end, the remark about the flashlight...and yet, she still seems to care for them so much... |
| On April 6th 2007 Tearjerker2020 Said : | |
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LOL, that's funny. |
| On April 2nd 2007 Paul4379 Said : | |
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read daddy by sylvia plath, you could channel her. it's your gift. develop your craft. |
| On April 2nd 2007 Bigheadmark89 Said : | |
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wow very good. When I poem could grab your heart and shake it like that and make your eyes watery, you know its a good poem. nicly done. |
| On April 1st 2007 TopKat1258Two Said : | |
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Gives me a melancholy feeling. It is so sad to know there are children who live in fear like this every day of their little lives only to die in the same fear! Never time for loving warm feelings from Mommy or Daddy. So, so very sad! |
| On April 1st 2007 libramoonpie Said : | |
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I really liked this it was so sad it touches the heart. I hope this was not in any way true how could someone actually do a thing like this. |
| On April 1st 2007 zaceffron89 Said : | |
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ummm its ok |
| On April 1st 2007 mistymcghee Said : | |
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you need to talk to someone if you didnt just make this up |
| On April 1st 2007 dimeporque Said : | |
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freaky |
| On April 1st 2007 beebee16 Said : | |
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eh It's okay but It should rhyme a lot more! |
| On April 1st 2007 tiffany1669 Said : | |
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it is so sad!!! |
| On April 1st 2007 joshvsedge Said : | |
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That's Ok |
