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This is a poem for my daddy R.I.P.

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Views (125) Pain Created on 12-12-06 Flag

With out you there would be no me.                                                  

 

 

I never wanted for nothing.
Everyday you struggling and hustling.
You showed my the way and the games to never let a nigga play.
Even when you was locked away   money was sent for  holidays and my birthday.
People always say  you spoiled me rotten.

Them days never to be forgotten.
I would give everything away for you to be back one mo day.

This pain will never go away.
But you will always be my Daddy!

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On December 17th 2006 Bigheadmark89 Said :
Bigheadmark89 wow, thats really good, its very sad and deep. You have a talent for writing. Sorry about your dad.
On December 12th 2006 kristenfmd20 Said :
kristenfmd20 i thinks it's very good....sorry about your dad though...
On December 12th 2006 1frogger1 Said :
1frogger1 very good work. very sad, sorry to hear. writing is one of my favorite ways to help me heal.
On December 12th 2006 hotpants21 Said :
hotpants21 sorry about your dad, but this is good.
On December 12th 2006 latishahealey Said :
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not twisted at all...... very good work indeed.
On December 12th 2006 TreenBean Said :
TreenBean This is a very nice poem... I read some of your other work, you have a gift. You konw they say the best writer's have been through the most stuff...
On December 12th 2006 Saikiyoumi Said :
Saikiyoumi aw sweet but kind of twisted.