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Things were blurred as u attempted to resurface, as u loosed ur grip on sanity or it u chould not find a purpose, you further descended into ex-humanity, numdness setteled inside of u, adrenaline reigning long enough to feel fright, u fought to porpel urself toward the light, but panic was wearing out, and ur exterior was skimming the sand, ur chances were far beyond doubt, u and ur worst nightmare, hand in hand, so hard to stay concious in the face of exhaustion, u long to forfeit, u longed to be at peace, but unavoidable fate had dished out this concoction, u closed ur eyes and in this moment it ceased, at the same time ur eyes opened, u found urself back upon the land, u relished in the spendor of breathing, and let go of the nightmares hand . . . . . . . .
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On May 10th 2008 babygirlbri321 Said :
babygirlbri321 wow. this is amazing..its filled with emotion. i love it.
On March 27th 2008 SoccerChik45 Said :
SoccerChik45 verry good! ~n thanx for rating my poem b4.
On September 25th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 its really deep.... but u did an awesome job
On September 18th 2007 SadObsession Said :
SadObsession this is a really good poem...u are very talented....keep it up
On September 9th 2007 wolfvalentine Said :
wolfvalentine damn, i love this poem. shows alot of emotion
On September 7th 2007 massofwebs Said :
massofwebs kwl gd poem thanks for reading mine also
On August 24th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 wow dude i really love this
On August 3rd 2007 Gigglez200969 Said :
Gigglez200969 this is really good!
On July 14th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx dark and beautiful, i like it
On May 31st 2007 rokmisox26 Said :
rokmisox26 i like it... it has a lot of emotion in it
On May 31st 2007 lacierose333 Said :
lacierose333 this is cool