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again, crappy, stuck in same style

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Feel the Pressure?

Views (63) Pain Created on 2-27-08 Flag

Pressing thoughts of

Razorblades and being good to

Everyone

So that you won’t need

Sorrys and lies

Under your skin or

Razor marks on your wrists where

Everyone can ridicule them.

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On March 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard It's a good style to be stuck in.
On February 28th 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :
smlesarahsmile lol i know what thats like.... too obvious
On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic I actually love it. Unique. I can kind of relate.
On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I can relate to that~ I just had a horrid moment a week and a half ago actually~ good poem. I think this is the first one I've read of yours. I like it.