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To Write Love On Her Arms, Revised
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Created on 2-27-08
To save her would be their
Only hope. She
Wouldn’t be lost, even as a last
Resort. For they believed she could live
In this beautiful disastrous world.
Though it needs many things from
Everyone.
Lost she was
Once and then she was saved and
Vowed a life with
Enough love plus more.
On her arms
No longer would there be
Harm or suffering, for
Everyone around her
Relieved her of this weight.
As she thanked God and gave up her
Regrets, everyone was
Marveled by her bravery that
So many wished they had….
Please Login to post comments| On February 27th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I love it! A really unique idea. |
