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feelings of depression ignite throughout

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Fighting Myself

Views (286) Pain Created on 10-8-07 Flag

Feelings of depression

Ignite throughout my body.

Giving me something to

Hate on my never pleasing

Temple.

I try to ignore the temptation

Nudging itself inside me. I

Give into the blade trying still to resist.

 

My hands are trembling and

You aren’t here to

Save me from myself.

Everything starts to disappear,

Leaving me lifeless and dead on the bathroom

Floor right where he broke me…
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On October 12th 2007 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst this is awsomeness especially the part where you spelt out fighting myself with the bold letters ^^ great job
On October 9th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said :
mazerthumpkin Why does everyone have to be so negative? There really are things to live for in life.
On October 8th 2007 samwhitheath Said :
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You are good I really like this poem. Most people can't really write emo poems that are good and you have. you have a nice word range. I hope to read more of your writings it's great!
On October 8th 2007 maceysmummy Said :
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great job love it
On October 8th 2007 poet77 Said :
poet77 :__( so saddd
On October 8th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic I love this! You're awesome at these word poems!
On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Great composition. I love this poem!
On October 8th 2007 eternallpain Said :
eternallpain I love it! great job nd i lov the msg behind it!
On October 8th 2007 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 wow dats really good great job!
On October 8th 2007 samobo Said :
samobo WOW..amazing
On October 8th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 Absolutely amazing. I love it. Great job.