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Created on 9-18-07
Into this sleepless
Night I wander, aimlessly through the
Skies. Searching for anything and everything
Or just searching for sleep to invade
My mind. I don’t have
Nightmares nor dreams, for
I can never get to sleep.
And to witness such a miracle would be
The best gift ever. But for now
I just wander aimlessly through these
Cotton filled clouds…..
Please Login to post comments| On September 20th 2007 AmberRougeSim Said : | |
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reminds me of gaara....... |
| On September 20th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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I like it...great way to capture the feel of insomnia. |
| On September 18th 2007 CassieZ Said : | |
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lol, its cute. nice job. |
| On September 18th 2007 Babydotz Said : | |
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Thats awesome |
| On September 18th 2007 AgeOfRhetoric Said : | |
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Wonderful! |
| On September 18th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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You're really great at writing this kind of poem! Awesome work, very captivating! |
| On September 18th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said : | |
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bravo! watch your english, though. |
| On September 18th 2007 joejoh Said : | |
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very cool :) i love it! |
| On September 18th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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thanx. =) |
| On September 18th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this one-I will have to check out the others (assuming from the comments). I like the way you did this w/ the word thing! |
| On September 18th 2007 Pikkakard Said : | |
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I agree... don't apologise for such great poems. This is another very good one |
| On September 18th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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No need to apologize they are amazing. it's really good. I love it. another one of those open meaning poems that you are so good at writing lol. I loved it. |
| On September 18th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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srry about all the word poems...for some reason i have attached to them lately... |
