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confusing but thought provoking.....Rate this Poem
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Riddled
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Created on 9-17-07
Nobody said it was easy
Nobody said it was hard
So why try things when seeing is believeing?
Because it's life, it's easy when you try
And hard when you make it
Seeing isn't always believeing and leaving the world behind isn't the answer.
Nobody said they would die without me
Nobody said they would live with me
So why am I doing this to myself?
Because I need to hear it
I need to feel it
Doing this is my rush, my high, my fulfillment, without it I'm dead already....
Author's note: I know this is confusing and kinda bad, give me criticism and suggestions and ill revise it later. Thank you!
Please Login to post comments| On September 18th 2007 Illiad65 Said : | |
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Cool beans. That's all I have to say. *~xILLx~* |
| On September 17th 2007 CassieZ Said : | |
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Yes, I do have to agree it can represent many different things for different people, this wasn't confusing it was a really good write. Nice Job. Keep up the good work! :) |
| On September 17th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I've gotta agree w/ the previous comments...Great work! Thought provoking, like you said... |
| On September 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I think this is great, because it makes you think and feel. I agree with softballdemon-the meaning of this is different for everyone. Myself, it spoke of falling in love, or just life in general. I think you did a great job with it-I wouldn't change a thing... |
| On September 17th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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lol not confussing at all
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| On September 17th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It can represent many things. In my own head it represnts a cutter or someone who is suicidal. It could be anything though. Great job. |
| On September 17th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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I absolutely love it. poems that may seem to be nonsense to the writer can mean so many things to others. To me It's describing a softball tryout. or a nice hit. or just something that is an everyday thing. and it can be something big too. Poems that are left openended like this one are the best in my opinion because the author made it so the reader can imagine it with any meaning they want. It could just as easily be a little crush or something like that. I absolutely love it and would hate you if you changed it..... not really, i'd just be sad because i like it how it is. |
