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Am I ready?

Views (240) Passion Created on 9-6-07 Flag

Would you kiss my scars and wipe the past away?

Would you wipe my tears and protect me from my fears?

Or would you call me an attention whore and become my tears?

 

Would you wrap me in your arms and tell me what i mean to you?

Would you save me and protect me?

Or would you rather discard me and throw my soul away?

 

Would you love me for who i am and now who i was?

Would you forgive me and accept my mistakes?

Or would you see who i was and run from me?

 

I just want to know if my heart can take the risks of that tender first kiss.....

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On September 17th 2007 softballdemon Said :
softballdemon Awweh... another one I absolutely love Alicia. it's great. It's so good that if I wasn't afraid you'd spork my eyes out I'd steal it..... just kidding. I'd ask you first if I could post it on my other website. I love it as usual.
On September 8th 2007 JulianaD1 Said :
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~awww...datz a cute poem...im luvin it..~
On September 7th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 dude i like it
On September 7th 2007 Ash94leigh Said :
Ash94leigh MY FAVE OF YOUR POEMS
On September 7th 2007 poet77 Said :
poet77 very nice last line
On September 7th 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard GREAT POEM ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
On September 6th 2007 Oddessy65 Said :
Oddessy65 Aww... It's deep. Wondering whether the risk is worth it... I like it =D *~xODDx~* (p.s I have 2 new poems out, if you'd like to read them. They're called "Halluscanity" and "Do You Know What It's Like?". Thanks!!)
On September 6th 2007 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ aww this was cute, nice write :)
On September 6th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 awwww...so sweet!! I love it!!!
On September 6th 2007 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz Aww thats awesome I LoVe It!!!
On September 6th 2007 joejoh Said :
joejoh very sweet! i love it!