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Addiction
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Created on 8-15-07
You ask me to stop
I tell you no
it's my release
my savior
You ask me why not?
I tell you because
it's my body
my pain
You tell me to share my feelings
I tell you no
they're my burden
my soul
You ask me if I crave it
I tell you the truth
the blade calls to me
and I obey willingly
You say pick: me or the blade
I turn my back
I pick my savior
Over my friend
That's when I know I'm addicted
Please Login to post comments| On September 6th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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thanx for all the comments! and rates!! |
| On August 27th 2007 mandamotrin723 Said : | |
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This is amazing. I LOVE this poem! |
| On August 17th 2007 poet77 Said : | |
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wow...very touching |
| On August 17th 2007 sara52595 Said : | |
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you are really good! you are so talented! |
| On August 15th 2007 thisistoddmoor Said : | |
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cutting yourself is such a lame cry for attention |
| On August 15th 2007 Davetheone Said : | |
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shit |
| On August 15th 2007 buggie1212 Said : | |
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wow ...thats effin sweeeeeeeeeet |
| On August 15th 2007 TaUroNui Said : | |
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this is great! |
| On August 15th 2007 LYNZANDROB Said : | |
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kool but weird |
| On August 15th 2007 Babydotz Said : | |
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Humm... |
| On August 15th 2007 ZxBrooks2 Said : | |
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awsome poem |
| On August 15th 2007 CassieZ Said : | |
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aww this made me sad, but it is a really good poem. Keep Up the good work :). |
| On August 15th 2007 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Very, very well written. You are definitely talented |
| On August 15th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said : | |
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they r right. amazing. i love this poem!! |
| On August 15th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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thanx :) |
| On August 15th 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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Wow... you are an amazing poet! This is excellent! *~xODDx~* |
| On August 15th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Great Work {again}! I don't really know what else to say... |
