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Created on 8-3-07
I used to be the rock
Now I'm the Leaf
I used to be wanted
Now I'm barely needed
What use am I now?
What use could I ever be?
I used to be the brave one
Now I'm the broken one
I used to stand up and fight
Now I lock myself in my dungeon
What use am I now?
What use could I ever be?
Now they will never see
what used to be me....
Please Login to post comments| On September 17th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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awwweh. i love it. it's like your new poem riddled. open ended. leaving the reader to imagine anything. It could be a person with depression, or it could simply be some famous person long forgotten by everyone. it could be a million things, but I'm not going to bore you to death today. |
| On September 8th 2007 Babydotz Said : | |
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Awesomeness! |
| On August 14th 2007 Illiad65 Said : | |
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... i like this poem... |
| On August 4th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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This is great! |
