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written in 7th grade 4 assignmentRate this Poem
My Poems
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Bloodshed |
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Self Injury |
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Disapointment |
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Crimson |
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Pain/Secrets/Life |
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Novel |
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Apart |
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love |
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Perfect Suicide |
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Silence |
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Gentlemen |
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Look at me now |
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i cant but i must |
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Addiction |
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Am I ready? |
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Created on 8-2-07
I used to be like a book where you would read one sentence and figure out the ending.
Now I am like a book where you have to read every page to figure out the twist.......
Please Login to post comments| On September 17th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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I love it. it's another open ended one. you are good at writing like that. though if you wanted i think you could go back and make it into a longer poem that the world would love you for. yuppers. one of my friend writes poetry and she gives them to me to read. then sometimes when i get inspired by them i take the words and lines and make them into feelings and emotions. hence my poems, thunderstorms, the vines, death, and all my really long ones. |
| On September 8th 2007 Babydotz Said : | |
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Again... True |
| On August 14th 2007 Illiad65 Said : | |
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Wow that was really long... |
| On August 2nd 2007 darediva551 Said : | |
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that is really good .... even if u wrote it in seventh grade i luv it
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