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Disapointment
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Created on 7-31-07
you look at me and see what ou want me to be
you look at me and see i'll never be
i look at you and see your disapointment in me
i look at me and see someone trying to be
i look even deeper at me and see the empty shell you left of me
you look at me and see i'll never be
i look at you and see your disapointment in me
i look at me and see someone trying to be
i look even deeper at me and see the empty shell you left of me
Please Login to post comments| On September 8th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I can relate... |
| On September 8th 2007 Babydotz Said : | |
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Wow... (You write what I feel alot)... Lol! WOW good work |
| On August 14th 2007 Illiad65 Said : | |
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... i like this poem...
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| On August 11th 2007 Ash94leigh Said : | |
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I fell like this alot ur so great |
| On August 2nd 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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This poem is sad... I've felt like this before. *~xODDx~* |
