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Watch You Die
I’ll watch you die
Laugh as you fight for breath
Does it feel good having a knife in your chest?
How does it feel to be where I was before?
But the pain I felt was so much more,
The scars you wrought upon my soul,
Created the demons that have taken control
[chorus]
Now I’ve had my revenge,
Now my heart can finally mend,
As your life pools around my feet,
I know that I am finally free,
I see the life die in your eyes,
As I silently say goodbye,
To the love I knew once upon a time,
But that was only in my mind,
I was nothing but a simple game,
But now you’re no more than a name…
[chorus]
so now you’re finally dead and gone
no longer can I be your pawn,
in this game you have created,
cause finally you’ve been defeated…
[chorus]
Laugh as you fight for breath
Does it feel good having a knife in your chest?
How does it feel to be where I was before?
But the pain I felt was so much more,
The scars you wrought upon my soul,
Created the demons that have taken control
[chorus]
Now I’ve had my revenge,
Now my heart can finally mend,
As your life pools around my feet,
I know that I am finally free,
I see the life die in your eyes,
As I silently say goodbye,
To the love I knew once upon a time,
But that was only in my mind,
I was nothing but a simple game,
But now you’re no more than a name…
[chorus]
so now you’re finally dead and gone
no longer can I be your pawn,
in this game you have created,
cause finally you’ve been defeated…
[chorus]
| On April 21st 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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Another song. I think I like this one even more! Great!!! :) |


