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Created on 4-19-07
on the outside looking in,
this is where it all begins,
a life of lonliness starts,
with just this little part
you see them laughing without you,
or are they laughing at you?
you know you aren't like them,
so why try to fit in?
no matter how you wish it so,
it'll never be, so just go with the flow,
live your life the way you want,
don't second guess and please dont flaunt,
follow your instinct in everything you do,
know that it will always keep you true,
no matter what stay true to yourself,
do things your own way, don't follow everyone else,
know that everything will turn out right,
and never, ever give up the fight.
this is where it all begins,
a life of lonliness starts,
with just this little part
you see them laughing without you,
or are they laughing at you?
you know you aren't like them,
so why try to fit in?
no matter how you wish it so,
it'll never be, so just go with the flow,
live your life the way you want,
don't second guess and please dont flaunt,
follow your instinct in everything you do,
know that it will always keep you true,
no matter what stay true to yourself,
do things your own way, don't follow everyone else,
know that everything will turn out right,
and never, ever give up the fight.
Please Login to post comments| On July 6th 2008 StarrburstBaby Said : | |
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Hey I really really really really really like this.
it makes me not wanna give up:) |
| On May 19th 2007 joshattack Said : | |
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This is an awesome messagel, and I definitely heard it performed in my head. It'd be awesome if you recorded some stuff. |
| On May 13th 2007 randolfdarnell Said : | |
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i love this one! |
| On April 21st 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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NEVER. I hear this. I agree. Always be true, and never give up. Two of life's hardest lessons these days. |
