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Better Off Apart
Better Off Apart
Turn back to me just one more time,
Listen to these words that have been on my mind,
We almost made it through this one,
But what we had is over and done,
My almost lover; my one true friend,
I’m walking away so my heart can mend,
You’re free to do what you need to do,
And I can move on and forget about you,
I found a good man; who loves me for me,
It’s time to let go and let our hearts free,
Let’s not force something that was never there,
I can no longer live in this pain filled air,
Just let go and I’ll do the same,
Separate; there won’t be so much pain,
Just one last kiss as we say our goodbyes,
And fly away into separate skies.
| On October 11th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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This one was so easy to read despite the raw emotions exposed here. I loved this one, and how it seems so real/unreal simultaneously. |
| On October 8th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is an amazing poem, it flows very nicely. |
| On October 5th 2007 ynot4u2hold Said : | |
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omg I love it. It's filled with pain, sorrow & love and hope and it strikes a nerve and brings a tear to my eyes. I hope that sooner or later you will see that true talen is here. I see it right now with my own two eyes. Keep up the great work. |


